The scales will not balance...
Gritty.
I especially liked the line 'Waldmeier’s tongue searched a mouthful of tea for the sweetness of the jam but found nothing.'
I wished to convey a man whose drive towards vengeance has extinguished his capacity to feel joy in any other area of his life. It no longer exists for him.
You've done so!
Gritty.
I especially liked the line 'Waldmeier’s tongue searched a mouthful of tea for the sweetness of the jam but found nothing.'
I wished to convey a man whose drive towards vengeance has extinguished his capacity to feel joy in any other area of his life. It no longer exists for him.
You've done so!